dazzle sad are you mad I am mad and I am not sure that you will understand away that is but it is as it is and I am not sure that I agony do this so you will not know what you are reading and I a don;t know what I am getting into with this things and its in me to do it but there are hairs in my head by the butterfly bringing nothing but butter and fat and lard to the new list of warfare noises and toy sound of my key board while I am towing something that I don't know will say what I an really think wing of or doing but this is an experience in word gyration and it could be an hesitating possibilities of chaos and sounds sights thinking brains are screwed up it is too
too much pressure to write hideout surrounding and too much pressure to know that this will be read by common when I am finished with it there are scary things out there in the world and this is toned the squarest at all but there are pears in all of us which we have to face
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O.K. i get it. i don't think i'm capable of letting myself go sufficiently to write anything that is totally powered by my unconscious mind. i've had to adjust the text on my browser (something I've learned from my new course) in order to read the paler words. Why are they paler - are they the words you have highlighted? I will publish something on my blog later.I've just brought up the original and it's in black-and-white, and I can read it easily.
after finishing the automatic writing and selecting words from spell check I have read over the text and picked out parts that I liked, so the pale text is set back as 'less important' I suppose and the darker words are the bits I selected... however I wouldn't say that these words could then stand alone, there's something attractive about having a set of words picked out from a larger set to form new sentences.
As for letting go and the unconscious mind, I think it takes a lot of practice cos I didn't feel all that 'let go'... it's no different to a free write really.
dazzle sad areyoumadi am dazzled like a rabbit in headlights you dazzle me with that light in my eyes why am i so sad yoy are sad too there is a well of deep sadness and someone is shining a light down into it
it is a pit and it is ver deep and wide like the satan pit in dr who where are two people at the top shining a ligt down into the pit
pit coal mine miners lamps canaries being used to make
make sure the
the miners don't die from carbon dioxede poisoning
poison is a rotten way to die it byrns out your insides
inside and outside the two are very different
O.K. that's my ramble. i never have or am likely to want to commit suicide. I seem obssessed with death though.
Carole - I like your ramble and am so glad you joined me!!
I like the line breaks, starts to look like poetry and in particular the restult of the 'rules' which has produed the line 'the miners don't die...' it throws a positive twist into the subject, and the last line 'inside and outside the two are very different' sounds like the theme of another piece of writing.
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